Hey Cap'n,
I just finished your Christmas story.
What a perfect ending.
I hope your three villains will return next Christmas, I thought they were perfect.
God Bless, and good luck in the Fannies.
Larry

I don't think the villains were dumb it was just an enjoyable KP story. Kind of reading an episode.

Thanks for story and good luck in the contest.

Excellent story, Captian, as usual.

Corny villains, lots of action. Typical cartoon fare. I think something of this sort would have been good as an episode. Beats the idea of Drakken "trying to steal Christmas". (Ron beat that dead horse forever!)

You got so many positive reviews, and I liked the story too, but...you really needed to proof-read or have it beta'd, sorry. Lots of little errors. That's the negative. The positive is that it was a great adventure, nice original, wack villains, and plenty of well placed humor.

Great story, Captain! Loved every bit of it, and my thoughts and prayers go to Ron and his stomach. Man, how anyone could eat that much fruitcake.. I don't know! Even that makes me sick to think about. Keep it up!

Nice story. I like how the villians didn't understimated Ron. That was cool. Well, happy holidays and New Year.

Danny

aw,poor kim and ron.They won't be eating candy canes or fruitcake for a long time after the experience they had today...

Great job! Captain, I salute you!! KingOAnime

There’s nothing like finishing the season and the year with a bit of silliness. Thanks Captain for an entertaining read and for all your stories I have enjoyed over the year.

Happy New Year

No, not dumb... Just original.

Ron and Rufus chowing down reminded me of when the two were snarfing down mini-corndogs.

Until the next...

Good piece of Christmas world saving. I agree that the villains plan was crazy, but that's hardly new. It was nice to see Ron get some recognition by the villains. Happy almost New Year.

Keep up the good work!

Bwa ha ha ha! I loved the ending. Happy New Year Cap!

LOL Awesome ending, Cap. Nice job on this fic. Merry Belated Christmas to you

Hahahahhaha Capt, tried fruit cake once, gained 7 pounds, still haven's lost them. Rufus ona stick ew, It was good.

Thanks,

Larry (Sentinel 103)

Good conclusion, funny and action packed. The support both Kim and Ron gave one another was balanced and real. I laughed at the part when Ron freed them with his eating skills.