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Reviews for: Feeling
Zadia Tachi
2009-09-27 . chapter 1
Just how I imagined her. Ahsoka is too skilled to die at the end of ROTS, unless she committed suicide. But this is EXACTLY RIGHT. PERFECT!
Pala-and-Papipa
2009-04-22 . chapter 1
Woah woah woah WOAH! SEQUEL NEEDED! Sequel... NEEDED! What are Star Wars nerds like me going to do without a SEQUEL?!
honkugly
2009-03-30 . chapter 1
This was very cute and brief. I didn't feel it needed to be any longer. Also, I'm glad Ahsoka is still living in this. Most people are still trying to find out the best way to kill her off. Though I would like to know how she would sruvive Order 66...

Good oneshot. Great idea.
Mirabelle456
2009-02-28 . chapter 1
One word: Cute
Vampwriter
2009-01-28 . chapter 1
That was cool. I wonder what it'll be like when Ahsoka meets Anakin's kids and friends.
inu'ika217
2009-01-25 . chapter 1
this fic was really good.
jedigal125
2009-01-12 . chapter 1
i like this story good good
Ann Jinn
2008-12-24 . chapter 1
You know, when she was introduced, I think everyone is trying to figure out how she dies. This is a really wonderful idea as to what happened. Lots of imagination. Good use of the darkness blotting out the light. Knowing when the different Jedi die and the darkness growing.
Kata
2008-12-21 . chapter 1
Really nice, would enjoy seeing a sequel.
Geri K
2008-12-18 . chapter 1
Yah, finally Anakin dies.
Ok, so he did the right thing before he died.
I dont know Ahsoka. But I'm glad she's a good guy.

*Smiles wickedly*

Great job.
Silver-ShadowSpark
2008-12-18 . chapter 1
Very nice story. A little short, though. Are you gonna write a sequel, where Ahsoka meets Luke? I'd like to see it. Happy holidays!

Spark
frodogenic
2008-12-18 . chapter 1
Interesting, and nicely written. My only critique would be that it was too brisk. I think this story would have greater effect if you slowed down the pace and did a little more exploring so we could get a better feel of what/who/how Ahsoka is after twenty-five or however many years. The ending in particular kinda gave me whiplash. There's nothing WRONG with your story, don't misunderstand me--I just think you could do much more with it. And I'll really, really like to see you do some more fleshing out and exploring because I think it's a fascinating idea.
TheMacUnleashed
2008-12-18 . chapter 1
Good job! Stories taking place after ROTS with Ahsoka aren't very common (Yet!), but I enjoy them, and this one was very well written.
Darth Comrade
2008-12-18 . chapter 1
That was pretty good. I was hoping for something longer, but it was alright.
Jessele Bryant
2008-12-17 . chapter 1
Great story! I've been hoping for something like this.
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