you rock,man!

Varon,you should really continue...you really explain everything,such as the feelings Soi had...


YEAH MAN!
WHOSE THE MAN?

VARON IS!
YAY!!

i think it was very well-written. and i think it stayed in character very much. i have to applaud you for the indifferent attitude of nakago not because i am a loyal yui-nakago fan but because you stayed true to the anime. also, liked the part you inserted about soi not being able to tell whether nakago's eyes had been honest or something like that, i like that even if she was in love with him she didnt just reject the possibility, the feeling that nakago *could* actually be telling the truth.
i also love the way you did soi thinking she didnt have a right to be jealous of yui.
well i'm not really fond of soi but i really like this piece. very very good job!

This was really good. You deserve more reviews.

Varon, I salute you. I'm aspiring to be a writer, and fics like this really inspire me. I wish I could write as well as you do. This story has everything I like in a fic: plenty of love, pain, uncertainty, and hidden passion:) You're one of the few authors who manage to keep their characters real. Hope you keep it up! Write more Soi and Nakago fics ok? I'll be waiting, ever ready to review some more.

k'so! i really, really felt sorry for Soi... arrgghh, that damn Nakago... but still love him. :) *insert evil laugh here*

::claps:: very good. Love it!

Ho-E.....I loved it!

I thought the Fic was wonderful. Of course, I love angsty stuff. I
thought it was very poignant, and that's always important to me.