 Dust to Dusk 2009-10-12 . chapter 9Crazy, ambiguous Marik is awesome. And I'm so looking forward to Ryou! |
 dragonlady222 2009-09-17 . chapter 10Nice ending. I am sorry for being so behind. I think probably where you introduced Ryou as Seto's cousin. I love that, can't wait for the next part. |
 Schizo-of-Destiny 2009-09-11 . chapter 10This was a wonderful chapter to read. The lemon was good, but I really loved the morning after as well. And Seto's reaction when Katsuya confessed his love. Aw. :3
A perfect ending to a great story. :D Loved it, I really did. Well done! Keep it up. :) |
 Schizo-of-Destiny 2009-09-11 . chapter 9Ryou, yay! I'm glad he's also making an entrance into the series. I kinda missed him. :3
I like how you wrote the convo with Katsuya and Seto's dad, Katsuya was well in character. :D You made me curious about that Laura lady though, I wonder if she'll be making any returns?
Great job on this chapter, I'm off to read the next. ;) |
 KittyCaesar 2009-08-25 . chapter 10WHEE! Man, each part of PYP makes the plot that much better. Can't wait until I read the next part. :D |
 KittyCaesar 2009-08-25 . chapter 9Woah! Really intriguing chapter! :O |
 KittyCaesar 2009-08-25 . chapter 8HAHAHA! I love the car ride over! XD “Please do, sensei.” LOL
AW at Moki and ew at Laura. lol |
 KittyCaesar 2009-08-25 . chapter 7LOL Oh Moki, can you get any cuter?! *huggles*
Hmm, interesting character of Kaiba Renji! |
 KittyCaesar 2009-08-25 . chapter 6LOL at the kiss! Get him Jou! *wolf whistle* XD
“So, have you slept with my son yet?” “Why on earth not?” Epic LOLs
Great chapter! |
 KittyCaesar 2009-08-25 . chapter 5Hehe, I like how angry Jou got at the beginning. XD That boy wants his sex, dangit!
LOL at Jou making Honda uncomfortable with all his sex talk!
And I really liked the whole present talk between the three. Cute~ |
 KittyCaesar 2009-08-25 . chapter 4Oh man, I really liked Jou's “Seto, you have to understand something about me” part! Wonderful for his character.
APPLE! Oh man, I'm going to be cracking up every time I eat an apple now. XDD
Yami's party was great! And when Yuugi said "Yamikins" I just burst out laughing! XD
Oh, and who can forget Jou and Seto!
"Honey?"
“Yes dear?”
"Hypocrite."
LOL
Oh and I love Seto's timing here at the end! Poor Jou! And here he thought he was going to get laid! AW! lol |
 KittyCaesar 2009-08-25 . chapter 3“Did you give that Kaiba a heart-filled envelope?” BAWAHAHAH! XD
Oh! Another interesting chapter~ |
 KittyCaesar 2009-08-25 . chapter 1*beats Hirutani* Grr.
Oh! Marik! Interesting...And things start off with a bang. :D |
 manganimewolf 2009-08-24 . chapter 10LOVE THIS STORY! this one of the best fics that i read, really is verry beautil, love the plot line, i like the lemon, is very intense, love it^^ and congrats for this fic, is a good one |
 Emela 2009-08-14 . chapter 10Don't worry, the lemon was very well written *fans self*. Great fic! :D |