I thought it was very well written- though very dark. I don't see Bianca as harshly as this story portrays her but I do hate her ever liking Babe and hate that she "stole" Zach's sperm. I love agnst though and thought you had that to the max in this fic. Nicely done.

Angst...angst and more angst! I love it! Looking forward to your new fic!