So utterly devastating and gorgeous. This just breaks me. I love that Teyla can only find some solace in John since he only finds solace in her.

Wait... it says fin...

That can not be the fin! I need more parts.. the hunt, the rescue... the BBQ of Kanaan.. I NEED IT!

Great story, I hope you do write more! Thank you for sharing!

Yeah, that's powerful and dramatic! You can feel her pain and anguish and anger too. Great job on this!!

WOW

I know you did this as more of a one shot but I was hoping there would be more because you are right it was better than the episode.