A major improvement from the original fic

if you read this, this story is amazing i am going to follow it even if it is nearly 4 years old just to hope there is more...this version has very nice pacing by the way. but your old version was also very good.

Great chapter! I really enjoy this story, seeing a completely new side of Harry.
Keep up the good work!
Eskil

epicness... coolness... plz continue

hiya. i really liked your old version. but i have to admite, this is even better. very nicely done, i was wondering though, i know its on hold and all, whether you would be updateing the story anytime soon?

xx Danni.

This is a great story! Please update soon!

Please update soon!

very well done. though its been a few months now since the last post. i hope your planning on continuing with the story.

Great up date soon!

I LOVE THIS. like honestly this is such a great story. pleas please please write more. i really want to hear more of it. your such a good writer too,which really pulls it all toghter. i love the thought of a dark harry, it would totally change everything. continue! )

its definitely better than the original

Great story, the other one was good but, like you said, was a tad bit childish with the sentenses and wording but the stroy and idea is great and really interesting to read. now onto anothe rnote: you haven't updated in TWO MONTHS! please update soon i really liek this story and look forward th the re-wriet iof the other chapters!

xoxo

Katarina!

Nice chapter.

Amber

oh i likey, i've been looking for a dark harry fic like this for a while, please continue, can't wait for the next chapter lol

Brilliant! I know I've said this before, but I'm glad you're re-writing this. This is a great story, I'm looking forward to the next update!