|Reviews for Dark Lords Ascending|
| MYChakram08 7/18/11 . chapter 8
This story is really interresting, do you think on continuing it?
Also this story is very well written. Hope for a next chapter. _
| Allyieh 8/24/10 . chapter 8
I wish you continued with this fic! It's sounding super good! (:
| MzBellezza 7/18/10 . chapter 7
| Roselize 5/31/10 . chapter 1
*deep breath* OK...how non-canon is this going to get? On second thoughts, don't answer that...Anyway...yeah...it took me about a year but I finally reviewed.
Right, so aside from the whole Harry-is-evil-thing *YES, BRAIN! SHUT UP! I KNOW HARRY BEING EVIL ISN'T CANON. LEAVE ME ALONE* and the Harry-might-turn-into-a-vampire-thing *I SAID SHUT IT, BRAIN!* it's quite good. I like your landscape description. Apart from one thing: If the moon is dark red why does it give off a sickly light! Wouldn't the light of a scarlet moon be more...orange?
Usually landscape descriptions bore me to death but this one didn't. So well done with that!
About the prophesy, you need to work more on the rhyming pattern. Unless you want it to be irregular...REALLY irregular. And pay attention to the amount of syllables in the lines as well.
Anyway...*gulp* I've reviewed something totally and completely AU *shudder* Excuse me...gotta go and measure my temperature. There must be something wrong with me. I think I'm finally going...sghslfh2h343ll... insane...sdgkhsdoi372hghh...I think the nargles have got me!
| Mini Luna 5/15/10 . chapter 8
Brill! Update soon please.
| Pickles and Cream 4/17/10 . chapter 3
i like harry new name , epic
| Eloise Rosier 2/11/10 . chapter 8
Lo from Skype here, great fic as I said before. It definetly gets better as you go along. I love what you did with the fic so far, most decent Dark!Harry or independent!Harry fics start when he's 15 or 16 and I love the vamp component. When do you plan on updating?
| Kitsumi-Hime 12/22/09 . chapter 8
OOh... me like it! it certainly is interesting alright! Great job! So since there were three dark lords, I am going on a wild guess and say the third one (and the most ancient) would be... King Arthur? XD
| Emeralden Rapley 12/20/09 . chapter 1
it so has to be draco as the third because im a drarry fan and i have recently gotten into the threesome pairing of Volde/Harry/Draco. please you just gotta do it. sides Draco could be a vampire for how freaking beautiful and pale he is. but the point is im begging you. it has got to be Draco. good Story though it is hawt.
| RainyDays87 11/29/09 . chapter 8
This is a really good story. You really need to update soon!
Your Faithful Reader,
| faiyaryuu 11/26/09 . chapter 8
:) harry is so cool xD
keep up the good work
| Micca5683 11/23/09 . chapter 8
Great chappy. can't wait for more
| WynterRavenheart 11/21/09 . chapter 8
Very, very interesting. I'll just congratulate you on the Draco issue, usually I see them as making a beautiful (cliché) friendship full of roses and pink and mirrors. I rather like it that in this Draco is an annoying prick.
You also get brownie points with Voldemort (though, for being part Slash, Voldemort came out more of a distant friend than anything else, you might want to concentrate on their relationship a bit)
It would be extremely interesting if the third wand belonged to either Grindewald or even Severus... but I guess the third one belongs to someone older than Voldemort? That's the impression I got at least.
And do correct me if I'm wrong but I have a feeling that the third wand belongs to a woman... (mainly because of the 'slash/het' warning in the summary)
To be fair, two of the things that really annoyed me here was the vegetarian thing and the overpowered kicks/jumps... Not really enough to make me dislike it outright but enough so that I'll approach future chapters with caution.
And before I wrap this up, do be careful with lengthy paragraphs... most readers tend to skip them entirely and it's usually in those that we put some of the most important information we want to give.
| Chakahlah 11/21/09 . chapter 8
Oh it is going to start getting interesting all right!
| dhh 11/20/09 . chapter 7
This story is very boring and cliche, to say the least..I mean, HP acting all good and noble and such is just OVER DONE and I HATE that it's the SAME THING OVER AND OVER in every story. I mean, if he's meant to be DARK, then for gods sakes, have him be DARK without the annoying knowitall bitch and Ron!
I'm just sick of reading stories that are always the same! No creativity whatsoever!