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Lochesh 1/28/09 . chapter 2
LOL the soba! XD no one takes kanda's soba and gets away with it
Aion Laven Walker 12/24/08 . chapter 7
Great

Short but nice b
Digimagic 12/24/08 . chapter 7
Aww...this was sweet! It gives you this warm feeling. And thanks for the cookie, it makes me happy (Which helps cause I feel sick-_-').
Digimagic 12/24/08 . chapter 6
Nice feel. I liked the fact you brought in Allen's freaky eye thing. Another lovely drabble!
GoGothGirl 12/23/08 . chapter 5
i know that this drabble is supposed to have an angst feel to it and all.. and it worked, i swear it did! but then when kanda said this:

“It’s good that we can’t have children.”

...well lets just say there's a lot of people at the Org that's thankful for that little fact. i'm not sure a little kid spawned from the two exorcist would be a good thing. the little devil would probably have everyone wrapped around his/her little finger.
GoGothGirl 12/23/08 . chapter 1
kanda and wine... yum. XD

m and i LOVE the sexy Allen in this. so addicted to his Kanda.
Aion Laven Walker 12/23/08 . chapter 5
Great b
Digimagic 12/23/08 . chapter 5
I agree with your inner angst writer! I love the lonely playground image as well! This was cute, nice job!
Aion Laven Walker 12/21/08 . chapter 4
Wow!
Digimagic 12/21/08 . chapter 3
Okay, this pure 'Aw!'!. So cute! Can't wait for more!
Digimagic 12/21/08 . chapter 2
I can so see that happening over such a...special reason. Nice one!
Aion Laven Walker 12/20/08 . chapter 3
Kyaa

I love this
SteeeeeeeveWatson 12/20/08 . chapter 3
This is really cute! Also the characterisation is good. But constructive critiscism wise I would say the punctuation is a little wierd! But overall loved it

x

Mimb
Aion Laven Walker 12/20/08 . chapter 2
Wow...short...but still good b
iruka92 12/19/08 . chapter 2
Soba-man... xO
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