Aww, sweet ending :D

I can't think of anything else to say... except for maybe, why is there only 1 other person who have reviewed your awesomeness? :O

Still, it was lovely

Oh god...

*sobs*

Axel died

Nice chappie, though :)

The gap between 9 and 10 is a lot. like...the battle, and it's not being there. The part after the battle with what happens to Leon and Axel's return. which I think is an important thing. being that he's Riku's lover. i just think you need another chapter or even another added part to the end of ch 9. because it's something big. Chapter 10 is done well though.

Umm... I'm getting kinda confused with the story line...

I'll go back and re-read it from the beginning, then I'll probably get it...:)

Nice chappie, though.

"You're looking as womanly as ever" xD

totally agree with Riku there xD

Two new chappies?

Yay, on to the next one then -

"But Axel's probably dead by now."

Don't. You. Dare. xD

nice chappie!

Lovely so far.

I'm just gonna say it because it's nagging in the back of my mind: don't kill Axel!

Umm, other than that... Zexy and Dem are engaged!

sweet.

i like it. i think some things need to be expanded upon but i like it.