*sob* its too bad you never finished this piece. Its really good.. I loved it! *sob* poor John... I love the last few lines... They were really really good. Its a pitty i cant ever find out how this one ends, but i pray that if you find the time, that you will finish it. *hint hint*

That was really sad, but very well written.

you are truly an excellent writer. the story was very very good...but...omigod! (hugh retching sob) it was sooooooo sad! magor tearage

So beautifull written, so achingly sorrowful, how can I read and not weep? Thank you for the gift, but oh the pain of it all. Bless poor old Crichton...sequel coming soon? Ali D :)

Opening another box of Kleenex