loved it! the only thing i regret is reading this story too fast as its been nearly 7 months since you last updated. I fear not tho because ive just noticed that youve recently updated your inuyasha fic . I hope you get around to finishing this fic, its one of the best Z/L fics ive read in awhile.

I thought this story has got to be the best fan fic I have ever read! There is just that suddle hint of romance that makes me keep reading and reading keep puting out chapters! I damand it! I'll be in a featle postion all night because I read it to fast and want more!

Yay!

Another chappie!

*giggles*

Brooding...brooding...brooding...

a cute mystical guy brooding over a cute petite yet powerful girl...

another hired guy brooding over the same girl...

ah...do I sense a love triangle?

Hehehee...please hurry and type out another chappie? Pretty please with sugar on top?

Thankies! Adios...Miss "L" _

Akai-chan!

Hurry, hurry, hurry, and please hury!

Please finish typing the rest of this excellent fic!

Pretty please?

Oh.I wonder what "Dar" is gonna do to will Zel save her on time?

This is no time Lina to be the damsel in distress role that she hates so ZEL AND RESCUE YOUR BELOVED LINA!

Poor snapped her maybe she wants a cookie instead?

Please continue writing! I like Z/L ficz hehe! Well just keep updating and i'll be happy! _

hi there,

i just noticed that u updated your story. gomen i've been busy. plz keep writting. i looooove xellos! he's so funny. i'd say that there was oocness but u cant really make this story as good unless there was some. all in all i think u r doing great. keep on writting i'm waiting 4 an update

always there

Crystal

you ARE goin to continue the story! Right?

Argh! Why is it writter's never make updates? Any way, this is fabulous, you must start posting again. Please, WRITE MORE! I can never think of anything to say in reveiw so I guess I'll leave it at this. Very, VERY good and entertaining, write more. Angie

*finishes chapter 11* ooooooh cliffhanger! i really wanna read more, and i love zelgadis/lina stories, they are just SOOOO right for each other! AYA! _ anywho, this is a great story, please write more!

You can't leave me there! Nooo! Zel's my favroite, I need to know how it ends! I need it as much as I need oxygen and crack!

aw! WHY'D YA LEAVE IT THERE!

*mutters* evil authors..

anyways please update soon! i like this story alot!

Awesome story, hope to see some of those magical spells mentioned I hope that the assasin comes to truely see that Lina is not killable in one of those cosmic sorta ways. I can just see her eating poison and not being affected.

YAY! MORE CHAPTERS! Still good. Now, if only you'ld update more

hee hee me like!

i like this so far! more chapters please!