|Reviews for Jump|
| HestiaRue14 11/16/11 . chapter 1
Wow the rhythm in this poem is incredible you did a great job I esspecially like the like with the ashphakt ocean. I thought that was a really great simile
| Naire 5/1/11 . chapter 1
Very nice. Nevermore reminded me of Poe
| DevilDoc143 12/19/08 . chapter 1
If I'm going to be completely and utterly honest, I can't like it :(
Mostly because it is about suicide, and STOP. WRITING. MORBID. THINGS! lol
Rhythm slightly off in places. Its not the RHYME scheme, its just the rhythm. It seems "choppy" sometimes, you know?
But the poem itself is actually well-written, but the subject matter "-_- O Goddamnit"
Write a happy poem! Please? Or at least one that doesn't involve death? lol
| motherf-ckingsnakes 12/19/08 . chapter 1
did he just kill himself?
| Hazmatt 12/18/08 . chapter 1
Great poem! I really enjoyed it! You're right, very Poe, especially that last line! Merry Christmas!