I'm quite suprised that no-one else picked this up: you have written Kelandry..it's Keladry.

please contnue with this story i like this one an it would be confusing for you to start over.

I think that you should post the next chapter anyway and then maybe do one more just to tie up loose ends then be done with it, then you should start posting the prequel as a separate story. I'd love to read both and I hope you write as much as possible, even though it doesn't have to be long.

NO dont stop this story i love it. Post the next chapter and ask peopel to help u w/ ideas.

I say post the next chapter and then let it sit. Who knows, you may be struck with inspiration in five years. Post the other one separately.

Methinks your character is suffering from PTSD - Post Traumatic Stress Disorder. :(

Oh well. Intriguing enough. Update soon!

loved it. I want kel to try to talk to rynn =)

Loved it. But i think Rynn should have at least one friend.

Very suspensful! Rynn is such a great character you do a really great job describing her thoughts :) I just feel so sorry for her! I'm really scared that she is gonna go crazy, I hope that she gets better. or she swallows her pride and goes to see a healer! update soon

great chapter it added a lot to the story and plot

This was probably the best chapter yet in my opinion!! I really liked it cuz she's finally opening up to people and forming relationships :) oh and somewhere in this chapter you say "drug" when I think you meant to say "dragged" just thought i should let you know... Update soon!

This is good. I am enjoying reading it. Fyi, you called her Emma in this chapter too. Hope to see more.

This story is good. Why are you suddenly calling her Emma? I could have sworn her name was Rynn.

Wow that was really really good. Like really really really! one tiny thing though what exactly does the necklace do and how did she get it? Other than that it was really good writing and long ta boot! Please please please please update soon!

This is an interesting story, albeit a bit far-fetched. But what isn't?
Anyway, the only error you have is changing the main character's name halfway through. Pick one or the other and stick with it, otherwise it's very confusing.
Other than that, this will be interesting to see where it goes.