Lol

Great fic

Their friendship and banter ending the story was great.

I think the only thing I can say against this story is that it needed a little more spacing between the scenes, maybe even a line space thing between the story and your AN.

Having it all together, even with the locations in bold, made it a little difficult to read. A little daunting even. But that was really the only thing I had against the story.

It was well written, well characterised and for your first fanfic, you should be damn proud! )

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FGH&F

Realy good. Love the Legolas and Gimli interaction.

Thanks for shareing this story.

Take care.

A great story. Very well written.

Interesting alternative version.

It's fun to read and it makes my smile.

Fantastic! I loved it, the relationship between them was shown very well. And the drinking game :D

I like the relationship you have here between Legolas and Gimli- great fun. And you get that mischievousness Legolas has just I like the follow up you do to the drinking game.

IT'S UP IT'S UP IT'S UP! FINALLY! After what? three years? heheehehehehehehe... I LOVE IT! but this you already know. The sense of brotherly affection comes through the story really well. I love your portrayal of the characters, very close to canon... I love your story. A nice little plot line (I love it when Gimli tries to deflect the thanks from Legolas. It's so swet!)

I look forward to more from you, tithen pen... (hint hint, that legolas one you told me about ages ago!)

Nela