That was intense  ! I can't wait to read what happens next excelent job 

I can't believe it stephanie meanswell a hero... Or al least thats what sportacus hopes for, uhm wonder wich way she gonna pick, now that she knows that she and the blue elf are related I wonder if maybe just maybe she and robbie might start something, I know deep inside robbie really cares for her, right?Great chapter keep up the good work, hope to have an update soon
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wait, whoa... does that mean Robbie is Sportacus' brother?!?

this is getting really freaking interesting!

i like this. i mean, it's not really good for a SportaSteph romance, with them being related as such, which does lead to a nice Robbie/Steph, which i think is what you planned, right?

anyway, i do like where this is going. it's a very original plot.

i've just got to ask if you've really got this story planned out or not?

if not, you should have at least a rough idea. that way, it's a little bit easier to write.

on the flip side to that, i like where this is going. cannot wait for more.

Oh my god! Finally an update and believe me it was a great chapter, I can't wait to see if steph keeps listening to robbie and they finally get rid if the hero. Robbie can't stop thnking of steph?,hm I think someone it's about to find out what love means, I can't wait for more!, great job!

oh gawd, how horrible a plan. but do i catch hints of R/S romance?!?

oh, i love how this is turning out...

wait, i've said that before, haven't i?

well, i do!

and i love the dynamic between Robbie and Stephanie. it's really tense, but still moves well. if that makes sense.

I don't think ther are any mistakes. I LUV IT. update update!

lol Loonytown... anyway Sportacus is REALLY acting like a pridefull jerkface he lied 2 the mayor! and he's weird he likes 8 year olds lol

well, as much as i love this story, school is important. happy trails.

WOW! I read this quick... I LUV UR FIC and I luv 2 speed read! update soon I want more Sporta-stupidness

OMIGOSH! poor ppl so much drama

good I like it

ah... I get the joke the whole shop drop thing