This is very interesting, as you have cross-referenced a previous fic. Is it a one shot?

hehhehe, very good, and just one shot-I love one shot stories; your style is quite discworldish :]

Should you really be starting another story?XD
Since I love Discworld, particularly the City Watch, I am so gonna follow this story *grins madly all over*
You're really good at the "style" of the Discworld, too.