Great story, though Nurse Joy's recollections of what too-young trainers did to their Pokemon made me saaaad... poor drowned Skitty. :( Anyway, I like how Nurse Joy and Don dealt with the crazed Rockets. :)

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Oh dear Arceus, this was brilliant and quite hilarious too. Even though this is a one shot I enjoyed it very much.

Laughed my butt of at this. I love it when people poke fun at mary sues.

This is great - I love it! I know it's old but I found it in a C2 and couldn't resist.

It's humour, yes, but certain parts are quite chilling and unsettling. The part about the Skitty drowning stood out for me.

It's absolutely hilarious because it sounds like a completely normal story for a creative kid to make up, and I have to say 'Billie' and 'Kid' was genius.

And then towards the end, seeing Mewtwo as a character in himself was great.

I did pick up a couple of typos and spelling errors in the Pokemon's names - Gastly and Onix, rather than 'Ghastly' and 'Onyx', but those are minor things which don't detract a bit from the story.

This was awesome and funny. Loved it! :) Oh, poor Mewtwo what is that girl doing with you? XD This story was very interesting in that it managed to do the exact oposit of what most Mary Sue fics do: create a unique plot with believable characters in a creative way. I really enjoyed this! Great job! :)

Hahaha, I love it!

It's actually very funny. Nice way to add all of the riduculous ideas out in the Pokemon section together. Very good oneshot story. A complete idea rather then Mary Sue simply appearing and disapearing...though, they do that, too...

Oh noes, the Mary Sue has arrived! xD. I wonder if her rival is Gary Stu.

And that Mewtwo and NJ are on the same page.

Very clever. Pokeballs made of fruit sound very Mary Sue-ish, and I enjoyed your Team Rocket motto.

Poor Mewtwo. That guy never gets a break.

Loved mewtwo's personality. Good luck getting out of her clutches. Many have tried few have succeeded. It would be funny for a sequel if mary-sue met up with the zapados kid and he just doesn't care. Or doesn't recognize any of her legendary pokemon. Btw, that mention of him confusing zapdos with a pidgey had me laughing out loud. That must have taken some explaining.

I laughed out loud for the entire story, once Nurse Joy’s serious part was over. I particularly loved the references to the games and also all the other little details. Mary Sue’s things were just so over the top that I had to laugh with the adult characters.

Wow. This was really funny, and it had a plot! You should write that Mewtwo oneshot, I like the way you characterize him.

I am amazed at how good this is. I just randomly clicked on the file, wondering why this story would be under the "Mewtwo character" category, and I can't believe how impressed I am.

Really, the whole thing is ridiculous. You're playing with the "girl-who-can-do-everything-and-then-some" idea, and Mary Sue comes across as completely ridiculous. It is funny, not in a laughing kind of way, but in a snorting kind of way. But you've done a wonderful job, especially with Mewtwo. How Mewtwo can seem to be in perfect character in such a situation, I don't know, but you succeeded. This is the Mewtwo that we know. I can't recall a situation less believable than this one, and yet, it works, and works well. I love his wistful wishes to be back in Cerulean Cave, his thoughts that serving Team Rocket would be preferable.

Some of your other ideas were good as well. I appreciated the fact that you've taken a lot of material from the games, like the healing white powder of Pokemon Tower, the fact that there IS a fisherman near Lavender Town, the fact that psychic attacks do not affect Sableye no matter how powerful the user is. I really liked the way the Team Rocket trio spoke intellectually about against bureaucracy and monarchy and the economy. Having them as vigilantes was really a cute stroke of genius. Granted, I did feel that the Team Rocket part of the story was the weakest to read. I found myself bored there and my eyes drifted. That part was too long.

Your writing is fine; I didn't notice any grammatical errors, and the story reads well. I'd love to see this continued, although it is unclear what will happen next.

AWESOME! I love it! This is the best Mewtwo fic I've found! And I have found nearly all of them. When are you going to update this? Soon? Please? And if you reply to this I will even tell you what made me like it so much. And once again, AWESOME!