omg, i dont know if its horomones or what but that made me bawl my eyes out...it was a good *sob* story

OMG I FREAKEN CRIED! your writing is phanominal! i enojoyed evry bit of it! only three chapters too! i know its horrible but i adore tragidies beautifully composed definatly a favorite!

That was so very beautiful and SO unbearably sad! I was kind of hoping that maybe you revised the ending to make it happy, but I guess the tragedy gives you all that much more impact... makes it all that much bittersweet!

You did a brilliant job on this one! Thank you so much for a wonderful read!

;_; That was so. Freaking. Sad. *emos* But good! a twisted end to 'The Little Merma-' er, 'man' *almost wants there to be a whole fairytale-remake* Great work!

That was so sad. Beautifully written. I had hoped that the blood from a small cut could have worked, but oh well. So sad. I'm almost in tears. :)

.wow. *sniff* this was so lovely *eyes glassy* as i'm reading this a song came on call 'the memory will never die' and it goes perfectly with this chapter. very well written. *silent tears fall*

oh god i love your story it made all teary eyed

*sniff* WAh... *sniff sniff* MOU... HIDUAI...Poor Duo... *sniff sniff sniff*

Absolutely freaking wonderful! I loved it. Loved it loved it loved it. Very nicely done!I don't ususally like paradies or whatever they're called but I really really did love this one. Great job!

God! Well I hope your happy now my eyes are all shiny! That was sad. But lovly!

I love it! Very well-done! Please keep writing!

Oh my gosh! Oh my gosh! *water up* That is so.. beauitful story! *crying* How come Duo have to die? Why not return the sea for safely? Why not go to ask Treize to have the potion that can turn Heero into merman and be with Duo? *sniff sniff* I love that story so much! It's... touching me.. I'm going to add that story to my favoite stories! And I MUST tell my fan about that story! Beauitful work you done this story! This is best AU story I ever read! *making puppy face* Please write more story of this! Why not give our guys a second life, like reborn so they have a chance to make up in the past? Oh, what the heck.. I love that story! Keep up with the works!

Oh gods, that was absoutly beautiful. I swear I was crying during the ending...Excellent story.

PLEASE SAY THAT ISN'T THE END :'(

please contine

Ah! I'm reviewing again, when I saw what your other readers left behind. What's wrong with you people? What did you want, Heero to dump Relena and marry Duo? Think that's going to happen? Or for Heero to escape to the sea with him? I think it was the perfect ending, absolutely excellent, fuckin' A, excuse my language, and I didn't see it coming... whether that is good writing or just me not paying attention, I don't know, but I still think that was great. Oh, my heart clenched when I read the last part. And the last LINE! For God's sakes...yellowhorde, man, if you read this, please do not take what they say to heart, that was wonderful. All of it. Like I said, excellent. Ooh I love it, I really do. And probably the best part is I don't have to sit around and wait for the ending. Don't continue it, leave it alone! It's perfect.