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KASARIN
2009-08-18 . chapter 4
This is excellent! Poor Rumble... Your writing is wonderful, you've got me completely hooked. I can't wait to see more!
Randomstrike
2009-06-28 . chapter 4
OH! So theres more to the Cassestte Rack laws than what meets the eye hm this is all full of some of the worse (in a good way) sad/angst stories ever! wow u keep outdoing urself.
By the way have u seen the second movie yet? Wa! u'll going ta cry...poor casseticons.
tiedwithribbons
2009-06-19 . chapter 4
Oh, of course! Blaster's gonna adopt the cassettes!

That IS what's gonna happen...right?

Poor Soundwave!
Ashana
2009-06-18 . chapter 4
Yet another amazing story! I'm so excited to learn what Ravage does, and how Blaster will react to the casseticons still being alive. I want to learn more about these 'laws' he was thinking about!

And if you really need a beta, I'd be happy to volunteer! I love your writing, but I noticed several grammer mistakes while I was reading. I'd be happy to help you out!
Tugera
2009-06-17 . chapter 4
Ohh.. that was so sad... vv :')
Poor.. ...poor Rumble, and Soundwave..
And Megatron ofcoarse can't bother with feeling guilty at all. XD

Oh that sounds interesting, trying to reformat TC. I'm sure all involved will be just thrilled with that. XD
Yay, Mixmaster's voice. >3

Aww. And Ravage is such a good eldest. ^^
CuriousDreamWeaver
2009-06-17 . chapter 4
Excellent update. I love your characterisation. It moved everything along rather nicely, as well as hinting to the future! I'd love to read more.
^_~
CDW
SUPERNICH
2009-06-16 . chapter 4
Why! Why! WHY!...This was a sad chapter indeed for me.
Poor Rumble...actually poor all the cassettes! This was well written for me and I liked it much!
I look forward to the next chapter.
Meirelle
2009-06-16 . chapter 4
Holy crap, this chapter was AWESOME! You wrote Rumble's anguish so well. And Blaster at the end. Hm... I think I know where this story is going.
madscientist
2009-06-16 . chapter 4
If a Decepticon probably wouldn't care then neither would he? Yeah, that's the Autobot philosophy right there. I must have missed the OOC warning for Blaster.
Skyjack
2009-06-16 . chapter 4
Hi. Normally, I don't leave reviews, but I've been following this and enjoying it. I had to review, because a part of it made me think of a quote from my favorite book:

"The ocean sorely tempts her like a lover -- she longs to shave her body and walk stinging into salt, naked, annonymous, battered and embraces by rage, nothing personal. Drown. The word is melodious. Beckoning."

...I might be able to help you out with the beta-ing, if you'd like. If no one else offers, feel free to PM me back.
Witch08
2009-06-16 . chapter 4
love this fic! does ravage and the other cassettes even know about Blaster at this point or will they find out later? if they don't, i'm sure it'll shock them! especially with Blaster being on the Autobot side! if they already know, then how in the world will they get to him?
Dragon260
2009-06-16 . chapter 4
*sniff* I actually want to cry with Rumble here...;-;
Dragon260
2009-05-05 . chapter 3
Oh...
Tugera
2009-05-01 . chapter 3
Aww-!! o_o evil cliffy.. XD
I love all the dread in this...
Heh, like that we got in Sunny's head for a moment, too..
Dammit Soundwave, are you dead? And was that Megatron's fusion cannon..? >:
Meirelle
2009-04-30 . chapter 3
OMG he's dead! :0 You kill me with cliffhangers.
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