I really enjoyed reading this telling of the game from the players view, I see you haven't updated in quite some time. I hope that changes soon because even after completing the game I find this refreshing and I would love to see how you will continue this.

A good story. I like the way you try to incorporate different quests into your story, and it certainly deserves the M rating. I am apprehensive about what you are going to do with Lucien of course, but other than that, I enjoyed reading it so far. _