holy crap! its is getting good! :)

THIS IS GREAT! THANK YOU FOR FINDING THE SIXTH CHAPTER! For the last few-mouths?- I though you abandon your story like the ones on page 10 and 11. At least you care. I give you 5 *! Yes there're stars. By the way I'll be writing on Fanfictons too. Don't know when it'll be soon hopefully. In the mean time keep writing and don't EVER abandon this Fanficton without finishing it, ok. By the way I'll be hunting down some unfinished Fanfictons until you upload if you wanna know what I am doing. I will stay loyal to you and always make sure your work gose smoothly. I trust you very much. ^_^

Yay! You found your chapter 6!!
Hmm I do wonder who Shadow works for :P

U know I already found out the ending for R & C Future:CIT. It turns out that A#$^#*$ is actually Ratchet's %!@#^#. You'll hafta figure out the words but once u figure it out you'll know what happens!

This is getting better and better!! I really like where you're going with this!
Gah, cliffhanger. Oh well, more exciting!
you better find that other half son!

MAN Im can't wait till the next chapter!

Awesome!! you updated!! And I must agree its the best chapter yet, but its only the beginning, and I know there will be more! I can feel it!! XD
I've watched those trailers, no offense, but Ratchet looks gay in those clothes lol
Can't wait for your next update!

omg cant wait for more

I like where this story is going, and I can't wait for an update!
I am truly hoping you won't take 6 months!! XD
Good start!! :P

Hay love your story.Its the best I'v herd.keep up the hard work

Just an idea-I think that you should have like Ratchet kidnapped or something like that.

Cool
Good job on Nefarious
that really sounded like something he would say/do
Grats

i like it, keep up the good work :D

I think you've got a good start. I like how you are going to have someone folowing Ratchet. Is the person that's supposd to be following Ratchet trying to kill him? Like I said great start.

Sounds good, XD Next chapter can be much longer XD