This is insanely good.

I can't find a reason why it isn't perfect =D
I enjoyed this one, thank you for writing,

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The raw skill of the prose could be improved, but the situation and characterization were spot-on. Take my two favorite characters and give them a meaningful friendship interaction. Yey. :D

This was definetly an interesting and well-executed comment. I like the idea of Kutner and Chase connecting, and I think the characterization of Chase from Kutner's perspective is spot-on: He sounds like he doesn't care to a very believable point, but it's a lie.

Very good. I think it's great that you're exploring the connections that are (or could be) shared between members of the old and new teams.

this was really good. I would love to see an interaction between these two on the show

Good job! Kutner's the most tolerable of the new team and it would be nice to see him interact with Chase more. You did a good job with Chase. The audience seems to know that he cares more than the other characters realize and you used that well in this story.