Aw how sweet! You know I've always imagined of how difficult it must be for Yuri but to see it in detail is good. Nice job!

Beautiful- Yuri's emotions are palpable. There needs to be more RoF fanfiction.

Yeah, poor Yuri had a tough time there. I never considered the fact that he could become angry at Chelinka, but it makes sense, specially when he grows older and has gone through years of having to fend for himself, maybe a little dettached.
So yeah, I like your take on this part :) good job there.

Wow. That was a really good story. You portrayed Yuri's pain very well without being OOC. Great job!