I can honestly say that I'm surprised that this story has so few reviews.
You've given a very good glimpse into Ronon, and you've written it well...personally, I find that truly good angst is incredibly hard to pull off, and you've done a brilliant job.

Very poetic. There could be a romantic tinge to this story but on the other hand, I think you've kind of captured how Ronon did see Weir. There was definitely respect for her and in brief moments, a flash of interest in this woman like no other. And I thought you did Sheppard's grief at the loss well, too. Story flowed well.

A beautifully written one-shot, nice work.