nnaw...
...sappy.
you're a hero of the old romantics, kay-kay.
merry boxing day!

Nice story, since i'm typing this on christman:MERRY CHRISTMAS!

UWE HEE HEE, THANK YOU FOR MAKING SOMETHING LIKE THIS THAT WASN'T YAOI, AND YOU ACTUALLY PUT SOME EFFORT INTO IT, YAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

this was excellent, keep up the great work.

Aw I love the Christmas fluff!

Merry Almost Christmas!

Aw! That was so cute!

A great and fitting end to a marvelous two-shot Christmas story. This has really made my Christmas, especially because Sora's such a sap whenever it comes to Kairi.

Favourite part in this had to be when Sora was contemplating telling Riku that he and Kairi had gotten caught under the mistletoe twenty times before they could leave the house.

May the Grace of the Valar Protect You

Shire Folk

i like it, update soon

Ahh? What's happening to Sora?

:P
It's the cliche's that make the fic.
always is.
It's made funny when you start totally ripping on the cliches.
that makes it humour.
XD
pop.
it was good, kaykay.
>:)
just to annoy you.

You'd better update with the second part sometime before Christmas, because I absolutely liked this a lot. Really what I liked were the comments made by both Roxas and Namine throughout, as well as some of the things that Sora would do, and the Fairy Godmother showing up to help out Kairi and Sora.

I wonder what it was you did with Sora though, like what you actually gave him.

I could REALLY tell that you were right when you mentioned to me that you were a girly girl when you said that my not allowing Kairi to shave her legs was punishment enough. There was a hell of a lot of stuff in here that I would never be able to imagine, because I'm NOT a girl!

However, I did like that this dealt with a dance, even though we never saw the dance. Mainly I liked it because of the fact that the one KH oneshot I've written was for Halloween and it was a Halloween dance.

But I would have to think that my favourite line in this first chapter is this: “I’m working on it,” Sora snapped back as he tugged at his school tie. Really, it was even too hot IN the school these days. He blamed global warming and people who had cars that didn’t need them. Like him.

It was great, but you didn't describe his car. I'm not a car guy, more of an airplane guy, it would have just been great if you would have decided to put as much detail into Sora's car as you did on Kairi's dress.

May the Grace of the Valar Protect You

Shire Folk

this is really cute, poor kairi, and sora they missed their dance :( this is really good can't wait for part 2

this was pretty good, can't wait for the second part.

Yay Xmas fluff! I love Roxas' "memo" part! XD