Alice! A wonderful story! In my fic’s, I incorporated Japanese history and Shinto mythology into the Yamanouchi storyline by making Toshimiru and Ron bosatsu’s (embodiments--like Hindu botashiva’s) of Hachiman, Shinto god of war and protector of Japan. You have combined history, culture, mythology, and the Kim Possible plot even more skillfully..

And Sensei practiced a form of Monkey Kung-Fu deception in order to draw Xueye Nu Zhuren out into the open. Like you said. “…making false impression of vulnerability to attack.”

And--you finally allowed Romance to blossom in one of your stories! True Love conquers all! You’re getting sentimental in your old age!

Hi!

YES! Finally a story where Ron stands up and fights for Yori! Loved the historical detail and the backstory involved with this piece.

The scene at the cleansing place was awesome too.

I hope you continue this piece. It has a lot of potential. Besides the Rori marriage, there's Spirit's redemption to consider too.

Thanks!

DJ

That was really sweet. I didn't see it coming at all. great story. Arigato, Sayanara ^^