great job!

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its good.

Bella somehow always ends up dying or dissapering in FanFictions...

But this is very well writen, there are a few parts that sounded weird. Like why would Edward even bother to pack the clothes if he was going to the london home? Was he not trying to leave the island as fast as inhumanly possible? But other then that it is really good.

Doyle

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