awsome! :D

Aw that was a cute one shot. :]

So cute! I really like this story, so well done!

Yay! You think I'm nice! You're the first one! EVER! This is cute! Did they become friends before?

aw sweet

That was so cute!! I loved it. :D Hardly any errors; 'cept for 'thee' instead of 'the' somewhere near the beginning, I think...

Anyway, great job! So adding it to my favourites~

Aww! That was really sweet. And congrats, I just read my first Harry Potter fanfic. Only you could rip me away from Twilight. Haha. Nice job, now how about an update on Just Not Now, hm?

that was so cute!!I loved it.

that was great! you should write more lily/james. you got their characters down perfectly.

That was... AWESOME! I was grinning as I read it. It was just perfect. You should consider writing more James/Lily fiction. There are rarely any good ones on here. It's a shame really. Keep on writing, you're definitely a good writer ^^

aw! thats SO cute! i love it!

Aw... too cute!! Adorable oneshot and I love that Lily kissed him in the end. :) Great work!

aw that was so sweet, it really was. i really liked it

that was amazing!

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