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Windsbane
2009-11-27 . chapter 17
Thank you, it's good to see an update to this story. I don't have too much to comment on though including the sword dancer in the chapter was an interesting idea. As always I look forward to the next chapter.
iluvstuff
2009-11-24 . chapter 17
Yay! Thank you~ (I've been hoping that this would update. :D )

I needed to know what happened to Emil. And Aster. But we all know Richter will take care of Aster. xD

Please update more~ Your writing is my life~
AntiSora
2009-11-23 . chapter 17
ILU ILU ILU.

I spazzed so bad when I saw the update! HOLY ~BLEEP~. EPIC CHAPTER IS EPIC.

I loved the whole thing! And I squeed when Tital was revealed to have evolved into a Fenrir. Fenrir = love.


Again, loved the chapter. I can't WAIT for the next update! Srsly, it will drive me crazy waiting for it. Wait, I'm already crazy. Drive me crazIER, then. :3



Bahahahahahahaha... The whole thing with Richter and Aster and Solum amused me to no end. XD Ah Solum, you better get used to Richter acting like that, he's far more used to dealing with your insane Knight that you are. :3 Besides, Aster'll forgive Richter. Because they're like BFFs. XD
Commandant of Heart
2009-11-23 . chapter 17
Yay! Updateupdateupdateupdate! I love this story! When's Tenebrae gonna show up? More action with Kratos and the world regeneration group would be nice, but yay! Update!
Gamer Girl
2009-11-17 . chapter 16
Oh boo.
It's been weeks since your last update.
I'm bummed.
But i will still check out the story everyonce in a while to see if you've updated! It's that good. :)
Please write another chapter soon, for the sake of my sanity.
(jk)
Rose
2009-09-13 . chapter 16
So win is Tenebrae coming in? and well he brake the Ice and tell Them that Emil IS Lord Ratatosk? or well Emil try to shut him up? Or well Aster find out first and what about the others now? so Well there be more hits of Richter and Aster? keep up the good work on this one!.
The Pudding Fiend
2009-08-31 . chapter 13
I'm not sure making Aster a Knight is a good thing, considering the fact that he has more than a few screws loose. But, I love Aster, so that's okay. (hugs)

I wish that your version of Solum had actually showed up in the game, which would have definately brightened it up.
Laryna6
2009-08-25 . chapter 1
You were already on my favorite authors' list for your Tales of the Abyss work, and then I go looking for fic for this game and what do I find?

This work is well-plotted, funny, cute... IC is hard to say in future/past fics, since people change, but all the changes/choices you've made in characterization seem very reasonable, fit the circumstances. I certainly like this characterization, in any case, and of course the plot and upcoming plot threads you've hinted at, like the implication that Aster and Richter are 'remembering' what happened to them, or at least Ratatosk's threat to destroy those with human blood.

This and 'Prince of Monsters' are two of the top three best fics I've found in this fandom. Thank you very much for writing this, and I really want to see how this all works out.
Gamer Girl
2009-08-24 . chapter 16
Yay! Titan and Leste found Emil/Ratatosk, or whatever... yeah! Sorry this review has to be short but right now i'm actually not supposed to be on here so... good chapter! Can't wait for the next one!
Blackrose2005
2009-08-21 . chapter 16
I AM SO SRRY! I haven't reviewed to you in so long... -sniffs- It's been more than an week since you've updated... Me srry! T_T
But... YAYZ~ You updated! :D lulz. Poor Richter, he had to knock Aster unconsious... (or however you spell it... I suck at spelling. T_T). And Emil met Regal! Wow! I didn't see that coming. o-o :P Then again, you could directly slap me in the face and I wouldn't notice. O-o

ANYWAYZ... Update again! :D And yush, school killz. o-o
~BR
sakura107
2009-08-20 . chapter 16
wow, fast update. not that i mind of course. i really want to find out how regal is gonna react on emil reaction and if aster is is gonna have a heart attack from worrying. great chapter as usual.good job.
Windsbane
2009-08-19 . chapter 16
Nice chapter. Poor Richter fearing for his sanity and having to knock Aster out to get some quiet. interesting twist of fate to have Emil meet up with Regal in that situation. Liked the cliffy with Emil's monster friends about to be attacked. Wonder how he'll explain that one to Regal.
Brendan Aurabolt
2009-08-19 . chapter 16
I like the forced "walk through the haunted woods" thing you did in this chapter.

I play World of Warcraft myself. Give me the server and faction you play on and I'll see if we can maybe meet up, etc.
AntiSora
2009-08-18 . chapter 16
Yay! Update! XD

Oops, almost messed up there, Emil.

Gee, it must be hard having two personalities. But I could totally see Ratatosk keeping Emil around just to bug him. XD That would be kinda fun... Having a second personality that you can just drive crazy and whose life you can just make hell just for your own amusement... XD

Very happy when I saw this update! XD

Ugh, class = boring. Lucky, getting a 3-day weekend. XD I have to work the one day I don't have class. XD

I can't wait to see what happens next!

I hope everything works out with Emil's monsters and all!



XD And I LOL'd at Richter knocking Aster out to shut him up. XD Nice. Don't worry, Aster. Emil/Ratatosk is much harder to kill than you'd think. XD

I'm personally looking forwards to when Emil meets back up with the others. :3

Can't wait for the next update, you're a great writer! ^.=.^
Gamer Girl
2009-07-31 . chapter 15
That was hilarious! I can't wait until u make another chapter, especially since i've been waiting(patiently, by the way) for the next chapter for weeks on end. If i had a profile on fanfiction, i'd put this story on alert!
One small question though: when Solum explained that Emil and his centurion were injured gravely, don't u think Richter and Aster would ask about that? Just curious, rly...Anywho, i'll be keeping my eye on this one as long as u keep making chapters for it!~ n_n
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