Help
Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search
Reviews for: The Neveragaine - Page 1 of 5
Robbie the Phoenix
2009-11-27 . chapter 26
Woohoo! Another excellent chapter in Ada's tale.

Everything about this chapter was great. From Ada getting the 'goodies' from the previous incarnates, to her sending that poor Ashlander guy out to dig for trama roots, to the last line of the chapter where she confessed to Sarethi.

With each chapter this story becomes more exciting, and I really can't wait for the next one. Until then, Cyas.
Kazic
2009-11-10 . chapter 25
Yay new chapter! I've said it before and I'll say it again: I want Varvur and Ada to hook up! They're so cute together lolz. I wonder what he'll do when he finds out she's the Nerevarine? Hm...
Robbie the Phoenix
2009-11-10 . chapter 25
First and foremost: I *loved* the title of this chapter. It’s so very Ada.

And I also like that Ada still more or less sucks at using magic. For many reasons, but mostly because it’s funny. And I think the fact that she still isn’t getting along all that well with Nibani (or, let’s face it, the Ashlander’s in general) adds a sort of realism to the story; she is, after all, technically still an outside. And I know I’d be getting frustrated if I had to deal with even half the crap Ada’s had to put up with.

Was that a reference back to Nibani’s words? It’s been a while, but I seem to recall her saying something about Ada being hard-headed. If so, nice touch – I think little details like that really make a good story even better. And if not, than wow, is my face red.

“Okay sucker, go and bring me nineteen ash statues from the Foul Zombie-Infested Caverns of Filthiness, and I’ll read you some more of our terrible poetry.”

Okay, that there? Hilarious! I cracked up when I read it, because it’s actually *exactly* what’s going on.

And that is just the perfect way to end the chapter. After all this time, Ada has finally been convinced. I can’t wait to see the long-term reaction to this news. Until next time, Cyas.
Kazic
2009-11-02 . chapter 24
Great as always. I keep being extremely paranoid about that mage researching corpus. He can't be doing it just for fun. Will you be playing the game Dragon Age by any chance? I'd love to see you do something like this story about that game.
cowhand Steve
2009-11-02 . chapter 24
Another great chapter! It was very nice to see more of Varvur, Athyn and Divayth, and the dinner party was pleasantly bittersweet.
Robbie the Phoenix
2009-11-02 . chapter 24
Ah, poor Ada. Life just isn't turning out the way she'd hoped, is it? Still, it was funny reading about her nearing a mental breakdown in Tel Fyr, and that bit at the end with the Sarethis was a nice touch, showing a much more... hm... sympathetic side to her. Most of the time I just find her funny, but this time I actually felt bad for her (well, as bad as one can feel for a fictional character).

Keep it up, this story continues to please. Can't wait for the next chapter.
cowhand Steve
2009-10-28 . chapter 23
I really enjoyed reading this fic! Ada’s a great character. She’s so funny and self-deprecating that it's impossible not to like her. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Oh, and I agree with Kazic. Some AdaxVarvur would be nice ;-)
Kazic
2009-10-25 . chapter 23
I hated Morrowind, but this fic actually makes it look cool. More please.

Oh and Varvur and Ada should get together. Just saying.
Robbie the Phoenix
2009-10-25 . chapter 23
Hehe, I find few things as amusing as someone realizing they have power over other people. So I chuckled quite a bit when Ada realized she could order the other Imperials to keep an eye on the Dreamer.

There were other things I really liked about this chapter, but that one stood out the most. I can't wait for more. This is shaping up to be one of the best stories I've read.
Kazic
2009-10-23 . chapter 22
I love this story. Ada makes me laugh. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Rumpleteasza
2009-10-20 . chapter 22
I'm ashamed to have discovered this so late! Well, it's certainly been my loss - I could have been enjoying this story months ago. It's hard to describe how I feel about your style, but if I had to pick a word, it would be... welcoming. It's so easy to get sucked in. Ada is a wonderful relatable character - you put so much humour in her story, but then when your readers are least expecting it, you pull out an insightful observation about her plight that really hits home (for example, Mehra Milo's comment on humans and souls). I love how her and Varvur are getting along, too. A team in the making, maybe?

Thank you very much for a great read!
Robbie the Phoenix
2009-10-19 . chapter 22
I like seeing Ada in a sort of mentor position, especially for a character that's already been introduced, and not just a character introduced specifically for her to teach.
ThorHammer17
2009-10-18 . chapter 2
I'm back for more... This story is still looking really good, and I'm pretty much reliving my earliest journeys through the lands of Vvardenfell as I'm reading this fic.
Keep up the good work!
Robbie the Phoenix
2009-10-04 . chapter 21
Plan A? Wasn't Plan A leaving Morrowind? Hasn't she learned by now that that will probably never happen? Ah, well, I guess she's setting herself up for some more disappointment (unless this story is about to take a huge turn from the typical Morrowind direction :P).

As always, great chapter. As a reader, I can really feel for Ada and empathize with her feelings of being overwhelmed with the whole situation. Granted, I've never been at the centre of a prophecy, but it's still fairly easy to at least feel sympathy for her.
mALX
2009-09-25 . chapter 5
I had to stop reading this yesterday and actually do some work but I am back today - I am addicted to your writing, if you write anything else I want to read it! I don't know when I have laughed so hard; I can't stop reading just to see what your character will say or think next! Great, great read and writer!
Return to Top