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Reviews for: First And Last
Temporarily in Hiding
2008-12-22 . chapter 1
Aww, the ending was . . . sweet. I luv'd it :)
CherryFlower05
2008-12-21 . chapter 1
It was kind of sad how he died but it still was a great story
Killuh B
2008-12-20 . chapter 1
Wow. That is simply one big mood swing.. I think that because she was depressed when he left and then Ino encouraged her to stay happy (which she did) and then she was really depressed at the ending (when Sasuke passed next to her).

I thought you did a unbelievably good job at describing & communicating the mood, tone, and how she felt when he was dying.

*Loud Bursts Of Appluases&

Yours truly,
Luke
ribbons-paws
2008-12-20 . chapter 1
Love it... sad fic...
BlueSword23
2008-12-19 . chapter 1
Soo sad! why did you make sasuke die? well dont really care.it works in the story by the way! GOOd story! update son! im the first reviewer! sweet!
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