 Killuh B 2008-12-20 . chapter 1Wow. That is simply one big mood swing.. I think that because she was depressed when he left and then Ino encouraged her to stay happy (which she did) and then she was really depressed at the ending (when Sasuke passed next to her).
I thought you did a unbelievably good job at describing & communicating the mood, tone, and how she felt when he was dying.
*Loud Bursts Of Appluases&
Yours truly,
Luke |