Heh, this sort of reads like a really fun dream, one where everything makes sense at the time, and when you write it down later you find it reads like a sped-up crack fic. Like the cat randomly talking and being important for all of, like, two seconds. And the ending voiceover sounds like the 'congratulations' at the end of an arcade game. Pretty good for raising a smile.

I could never finish stories when I was in school; the drafts just went on and on. I think the only time I did manage to finish one was when it had to be a single side long, and I did something about a little black hole drifting down a hill - I don't really remember, but it didn't have much point to it. The closest I came to writing fanfic in an academic setting was using 'Robin' and 'Mary' (the Japanese names of Isaac and Mia) as the names in a piece of Japanese homework the other year; they just had a script-style conversation along the lines of "Are those five umbrellas yours?" and "That is Alex's pillow", so my sensei didn't understand why I was giggling when she handed it back...

Good work man.
I noticed the Kingdom hearts reference straight away. For a 6th graders work this is good. I quite like the way you write.

Im adding you to my favorites.

Psh, heheheh...that was golden. I can totally imagine your forum avatar fighting back, throwing all sorts of djinni and spells at some random fire-beast. Dullahan's standing back, thinking "Do NOT ** that girl off."

Awsome fic! You should be proud, last year on 2 tests, i was the only one with 100 percent, in both 7th grade classes!!So, again, AWSOME!

I really liked how the setting was constantly changing. It kind of reminded me of this story that I read when I was younger where the kid kept falling asleep and woke up in the future. XD there was one part where he woke up on his bed in the middle of a freeway.

Oddly enough, I luffle KH but I can't find the theme. Maybe I'm just tired. XD