aw that was so sad! poor naruto!

This is a beautifully written piece of literature and I loved it. There were a couple grammar mistakes but that is, of course, easily overlooked. I loved your word choice, especially the word 'allegory'. I have a SLIGHT facination with it. lol I did not catch on to the double-meaning but I can see it after it was explained and I also agree with it. Overall, absolutely worthy of awe.

I remember I saw that dojinshi on youtube and I loved. I think this is great I wish you could make some kind of sequal to this story.