Aww! *sob* it was so sad! ;( I hope that didn't count as a spoiler... would it? anyway, that was a really touching story. I loved it, and i hope to read more of your stories. Keep Up The Good Work!!

the manga would've been better really if this happened.
great work! any plans on a sequel? :)

You always write such powerful words, I love it. I want to know if Ichijou is alright..

I have tears in my eyes right now. That's just beautifully written..

No! Arrgh! I really hate that Ichijo up and left to fight Gramps and having Shiki awake instead- and kissing him too- is terrible bittersweet. xDD That really got me. Good job.

~ Val

I wish this really happened... I mean... on the Manga, at least they acknowledged each other before leaving. In the Anime, it was basically Ichijou saying goodbye to an unconscious Senri. I was very disappointed. Thank you for writing this. I'm faving it!

Wow! This was beautifully awesome. *sniffle*
It touched me deeply to see them hurting for each other like this ... and that kiss! Oh my. I loved it.

Hmm, any chance for a sequel ... after Ichijou had met his grandfather? ^_^

-is sad- ... sorry don't know what else to say, it's a neat piece of writing and I liked the feelings a lot... made me feel something?

Wah, you always write such emotional stories! I don't know this series at all, but this was a beautiful moment between the two.