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Adam
2009-07-23 . chapter 4
I liked your story but the 'uncle Aaron' thing killed everything for me, lol. It was a bit over the top. (especially because I don't like Reid in CM).
PaperHat
2009-04-11 . chapter 4
This was a great ending. I loved the fact that you brought in the rest of the family.

I think Mack handled things really well.

Would love to see another crossover of these two shows. Plezzee!
oscargirl
2009-03-27 . chapter 4
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU. I've waiting somewhat impatiently to read this chapter.
Demon Sin
2009-03-25 . chapter 4
AWESOME! LOVED IT!
Hotch so got what he needed from Mack.
achillies-eel
2009-03-22 . chapter 4
Aw, OMIGOSH I love it! -hugs Hotchy- -hugs Mack- -hugs everyone else- :P

About time you got this up girl! I've been waiting for ages! :D

The family is finally coming together! I can't wait to see what will happen next, now that the 'kids' have finally met 'grandad'.

Excellent job!! Uber glad you got this chapter out!! Hope to see more from you soon!
wandamarie
2009-03-21 . chapter 4
it was a good chapter thank you
Emerald Eyes of Flame
2009-03-21 . chapter 4
aw...
thats swet
poohbear123
2009-03-21 . chapter 4
great finish like how you left it so you could write another one. can't wait for your next story hope it will be NCIS or CSI New York or hey a crossover with them .
Sue1313
2009-03-21 . chapter 4
Love this chapter. The scene between Mack and Hotch was just so tender. The spanking was perfect at the moment there was nothing else Mack could have done. The talk afterward was so sweet. The best part was when Hotch introduce Spencer and Derek to his dad. What Jonas taught Hotch is now being passed on to the next generation. I would so love to see the sequel of Jonas and Mack coming to visit Hotch's kids. Maybe even go on a case with them. Spencer needs a grand-dad.
kricket1982
2009-03-21 . chapter 4
whoohoo!! i knew you would finish this way to go! it was another great chapter not like i expected anything less from you.
PH2W
2009-03-21 . chapter 4
Long & painful as far as waits go, but completely worth it:-):-).
You demonstration of Macks temper and inner-conflictions was good. It showed the contrast between his dealings and Jonas' very well.

The open ending gives us something to look forward to if RL permits more stories to flow from you.

Thanks for sharing...
Stroma
2009-03-21 . chapter 4
Glad you finished this off. It would be a good fic to write a follow up on.
Corwin's Baby Girl
2009-03-17 . chapter 1
cool
TicTac
2009-03-08 . chapter 3
I loved this chapter, just re-read it for the umpteenth time. Waiting for conclusion is driving me crazy. Thanks for the story
forestandocean
2009-02-01 . chapter 3
I loved this chapter (and thanks for the shout out btw)
I can hardly wait for more

~looks around for chapter 4~

trying to be patient but your writing is just too good...more please...pweety pwease

*hugs*
Logan
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