Jess and Stella are absolutely insane to get involved in a case like this alone. I'm glad Jess finally let Don in on it. I loved his last line "I'm thinking of my life." His overprotective tendancies is one of my favorite traits of his, even in the series.

the last line was excellent. (also very sweet)

Love it, keep up the great job. But if Stella gets Angell killed, as much as I love Stella, I'll never forgive her. lol

aw, it was so cute I loved it

I love the last line. I enjoy the way you write Flack & Angell!

Really good! Excellent story, I enjoyed reading it. Nice follow on from the storyline in the show, and I liked how you brought Flack into this. The last line of the story (working slightly backwards here) was fantastic, very cleverly done to show how Flack is prioritising his feelings and the things, and people in his life, 'While his career meant a lot to Flack, it wasn't the first thing on his mind in the morning and the last thing on his mind when he went to sleep. His career would mean nothing to him if something happened to Angell. "I'm thinking of my life."'
I think with Angell and Stella working together, you've got two very strong female characters, and adding Flack into the mix is good as well as he's a good friend of Stella's, and I liked how you brought in the risk of what they're doing. Loved the connection you wrote so subtley between Flack and Angell when he appears in the restaurant, but Angell is able to communicate with him by just a looki. Angell too is very much in character wh what you write about how she is determined to bring justice to a man who has caused so much damage to others. Really liked how you wrote her feelings about Declan Rooney and how his son has been left without him. Really good! Looking forward to reading more from you soon :)