 Tirelipimpon sur le Chihuahua 2009-05-09 . chapter 7Wow 2 chapters for the wait of one!=D
Your writing/story/characters development/"in character-ness" are still very good. I love your story,that's so pleasant to read!
Can't wait for the next chapter!=D |
 trabeck 2009-05-08 . chapter 7I love it! I can't wait for the next chapter!! Update soon please!^^ |
 kysis 2009-05-07 . chapter 7I love this story. So much. Caddie cracks me up to no end, especially when she tells Tseng she wants to watch. Gawd what I wouldn't give to get that opportunity and too bad Tseng doesn't give it. *melt*
More please? |
 Aeriths-Rain 2009-05-07 . chapter 7Great chapter! Tseng has way too much work, and I look forwards to the possible confrontation between Reno and the brother-trainees! |
 Aeriths-Rain 2009-05-07 . chapter 6a great chapter... poor Rufus... I really want to read more *runs on to the next chapter* |
 Crimson Hawk of Darkness 2009-02-07 . chapter 5I'ts awesome =3 plz update soon. This story is very interesting |
 Aeriths-Rain 2009-02-06 . chapter 5poor Tseng.. but Rufus is just lonely! I think they'd be good friends! and it wasn't Reno's fault he answered the phone. Great chapter! |
 Crimson Hawk of Darkness 2009-01-18 . chapter 4It's awesome =3 keep up the good work |
 Cookiecat 2009-01-18 . chapter 4(*drumroll* The constant reviewer strikes again... ;)
First of all: Thank you so, so, so much! That update was just what I needed to get my mind off all the German Literature stuff I've been consuming during the last days (And I constantly felt like Tseng at the end of chapter four... unable to get anything done properly).
To say it once again: I just loved it!
Your characterization is incredible. I keep thinking that you don't have any room left for improvement, but you always prove me wrong. With every new character you introduce (no matter if major or minor), you get better and better. Simply amazing.
I especially like the way you portrait Rufus, and of course I still adore Reno (in all his confusion(s). Additionally, I really admire Tseng's patiences ;)
All-in-all verdict: eleven stars out of ten :)
Please, keep going. You caught me hook, line and sinker. |
 Aeriths-Rain 2009-01-18 . chapter 4aw wow, this is so cute. I'd initially thought it was Tseng and Rufus, but then I realised Rufus was too young. Tseng and Veld are very sweet!
I also love your style of writing Rufus, and the way Tseng understands him.I think Rufus and Reno will be good for being friends with each other! |
 Aeriths-Rain 2009-01-18 . chapter 3wow, another great chapter. Poor Reno, he tries so hard.. and he keeps messing up, but he'll get better. I love the way you write Tseng in this! |
 Crimson Hawk of Darkness 2009-01-02 . chapter 2awesome =3 |
 Aeriths-Rain 2009-01-02 . chapter 2wow... *squeals and hugs reno* im sorry. it had to be done. Another lovely chapter, and i look forwards to seeing where you go from here! |
 Cookiecat 2009-01-02 . chapter 2Hey there!
Glad to see you 'made it' into the new year. And you even spoil me with updates again (*big smile*)...
I really loved that chapter!
Reno is still cute, and his reaction to the pink bedroom made me laugh out loud :)
And Tseng's choice of night wear is very interesting... (*giggles*)
As usual: Can't wait for the next chapter... ;) |
 kysis 2008-12-20 . chapter 1Oh man. You put it up on here too. So happy.
This means that I get notices now, and that I can reread every single one again upon notice. M.
But that doesn't mean stop writing the new stuff and putting it on LJ. Really. I think I'd die if I had to wait until you caught up on here to see the new stuff. |