Ignore the jerks who said it was confusing. Note how they won't sign in?

It was awesome and blush worthy.

/slow applause

Bravo. One of the best mini-smuts I've read. I couldn't help but smile at the last line.

Kudos.

i think u could a little better... the story makes no sense. ur wording is off in some spots but other then that the concept /idea of the story is somewhat easy 2 envision.

hot, :)

it's kind of confusing