Good one-shot! :)

Dang...that was intense! Lol, silly Edward!

~Miko

o i loved this one
it was so sexy
yei
i had goosepumps myself
lol

whoa!
dnt u just luv edward?
ahh dats all i can say.
*sigh*
=P

That was an extremely well written story. It had passion and emotion in it. I only wish it was longer. Great job!

wow, i felt the 'passion' in that chapter. it's remarkable how real that felt. i'd enjoy more stories like this if you wrote them.

hot damn

that was simply amazing!
=]

Very cute story, well written also! i like the story very much!