 1world-traveler 2009-12-17 . chapter 6awsome i love it though the vampires is acting kinda weird please update asap |
 vikinglass25 2009-12-15 . chapter 6Please do that story! Please! It sounds so good. It would be so interesting if she's destined for all three brothers. LOL. I can't wait to see how Aro feels about Bella when he comes to track down his brothers. Also, Carlisle needs to admit his feelings because I really don't want to see Bella with Edward.
Keep up the excellent work! Please update again soon! |
 Deviously Ruined Rose 2009-12-14 . chapter 6love your omakes! they are hilariousness!! XD |
 Ellyanah 2009-12-07 . chapter 6Brilliant, absolutly hilarious (the omakes had me giggle like a maniac), and totally different from any twilight story I have ever read.
I absolutly adore it.
I hope you can update soon. |
 Corrupted Desires 2009-12-05 . chapter 6I love this story. It never fails to make me giggle. I particularly like the omakes, though the entire thing tends to make me smile... Especially Alice and Jasper. :D |
 Kookie-chan 2009-12-05 . chapter 6Stairway to Heaven sounds interesting. I'd read and review ^^ |
 icelandic oasis 2009-12-05 . chapter 1Your writing is very good (and there are only a few grammatical mistakes).
My principal problem with this story is its cohesion. There seem to be too many threads going on for such a short story. Edward history, Alice/ Jasper, Carlisle/Bella love interest, Volturi people, Bella's dynamic illness, it's confusing! I think this story would be seriously improved if you shaved the unnecessary pieces out.
Good work. |
 nette0602 2009-12-05 . chapter 6I love your story.. please update |
 TishPhoenix 2009-12-05 . chapter 6Loved the chapter and really can't wait to read more hun, I am addicted to it :D so please update again soon :D
The Volturi fic sounds great and original, it would only be better if the hotty Demetri had his hand in it as well as the brothers lol :D can't wait to see that one hun :D |
 sprazinko 2009-12-05 . chapter 6This is really good and think your new story would be really good too |
 Shakari 2009-12-05 . chapter 6I like the idea you have for the story! It looks really cool! And there's no mention of B/E! YAY! |
 ShatteredAndLostInHerOwnWorld 2009-12-05 . chapter 6i love the new story idea i hope you write it and i love this chapther it had me smiling from begining to end :) |
 Haru Inuzuka 2009-12-05 . chapter 6Haha, this chap was GREAT!! ^^ LOVED the omakes! They were FUN-NY! XD What will happen now? Plz continue soon, kk? Ja ne! -^^- P.S.: I love the Bella/Volturi story idea! Please write it! Please? -puppy eyes- XD |
 marie potter riddle 2009-12-05 . chapter 6HI! I love your story! I'm glad you updated! I'm really interested in your volturi story! There are not enough of them! Update soon! |
 Megara1 2009-12-05 . chapter 6Hi !!
I liked a lot how you incorporated Caius in the story...he will play the role of the evil brother !
For Athenadora's death, I'm glad, because I didn't like all the wives of the Volturi brothers, except maybe Didyne who should be really sweet.
So now Carlisle faced up his feelings for Bella, will he act or will he stay prudent because of Marcus warning ?
More please
Megara |