Wow. I loved this!
I think you should make a second chapter or something. That would be awesome.<3
Good story, though. (:

yea i have no idea wht ur trying to explain :/

That was amazing:Dthe fight scenes were well put together too.
I REALLY love this pov of them meeting again like this:)
I can't believe you wrote this for PET too!
amazing job again!!

Loved it. And I'm 200% happy, if you wanted to know. :DD

-BB21

omg. i totally got it and gah.
yesh. he wants her to understand why. aofhefoewijf.
sasuke-kun loves.
.yesh

This one-shot was amazing. I loved every bit of it... the detail, the flashback, the fight scene... and especially the ending. Good job and I can't wait to read more of your fics.

*faves*

Ur a genius!
I loved it!
Sux it is only a one-shot cuz it definitely has multi chapter potential
i am actually really curious to know why you wouldn't make it a multi, is there a reason behind the decision?
you really are a skilled writer and this story was amazing

Very fluid writing style! You've just made me a fan :)
I was especially drawn to all the 'unspoken' actions throughout this oneshot. I will definitely have a look at more of your work!

Aw, no sequel?! MAN! But...that was awesome! I hope to here more stories from you!

Let me just say that I think this one-shot is a testement to your excellent skills as a writer. You took elements like sentence structure/length and the oh-so-dreaded 'question' and parallel word usage and made it into a tone- and emotion-driven piece of fiction. Mah Twinneh is SO WIN. :3

Example: 'Dead bodies. Everywhere. People she could not save. They littered the once peaceful streets. It was every medical ninja’s personal nightmare.' The staccato structure and length lend that desperate, broken element that made the chaos of Konoha enherient rather than explicit or overly worded. *_*

Example 2: 'What had happened? How had this happened? How could Konoha, mighty, proud Konoha, have been almost completely wiped out by one of Pein’s jutsus? Just how powerful was he?' This part illuminated the emotional side of things for Sakura and made her state of mind apparent without any cliche or trite lines. EPIC WIN, Twinneh mine.

And the Kisame fight was PERFECT. No Canon-sue Sakura for mah TWINNEH! You kept her true to her emotional side AND her innate fighting spirit. She wasn't AMAZINGLY l33t hakz strong OR totally useless. She was SAKRURA. *applause* :D

OH! And just WHY was Itachi describing Sakura to Kisame? Hmm? Here comes my attempt at a TWINNEH script:

Itachi:: -/_\- Kisame.
Kisame:: ^//_\\^ Yes, sexy--I mean Itachi?
Itachi:: -/_\- Remember this description: Short, petite pinkette kunoichi from Leaf Village with green eyes.
Kisame:: o//_\\O?? O...okay, may I ask why sexy-I mean ITACHI?
Itachi:: ^/_\^ She's mah future sister-in-law and if you harm a hair on her pink little head, I'll gut you. Okies?
Kisame:: x//_\\X *is speechless*

LOL XD With a warning like that WHY would he attempt to harm Sakura? Oh yeah...'I’ll certainly earn brownie points for taking out one half of the team that defeated Sasori.’ I can't blame him for trying, even if he's gonna get a BEATIN' from Teh Sauce later. JUST WAIT! o_O

THE FLASHBACK = IC FLUFF OF PURE WIN. ZOMG. I want to steal your brain, Twinneh! You are the master of young!Sasuke / young!Sakura. *_* I love that you added in Kaksahi (our favorite SMEXY sensei) watching over his kids--I mean students.

O! And this line? 'Then, carefully, in the waning light of the sunset, and in perfect unison, they took a step forward together.' = EPIC. Enough said. SRSLY.

PLUS: 'She was standing in perfect poise over the water.' For contrast? EPICALLY EPIC. Mah Twinneh is teh WIN. ^_^

And your Sakura is so SPUNKY! "‘EAT THIS!’ She yelled." =

Very interesting story indeed. But I cannot understand the need to end it so abruptly. Nontheless, loved it. Thanks!

this is a good story, though it would have been better if you continued it... this story is a magnificent beginning...

You know, I've sort of been hoping that this is why Sasuke has been cooperating too; to betray Akatsuki and save Naruto. Since he's such an ** though, I'm sorta doubting that'll be the case.

Another awesome fic written by you =P I love your one-shots they're always so long and detailed. I hope you will produce more SasuSaku fics. =)

Overall, this fic was really good. The plot was exactly what I like to read in a SasuSaku fic =D Good job!

Makes me sad...good one shot



~Mistyfire