oh how depressingly wonderfull!

i feel so bad for alex. I take it fox has joined the MI6 and this is after snakehead? very nicely written though

I haven't read the story this is a prequel to, but I might now. I hope this goes on and can't wait for another chapter!

i liked it...
a bit angsty and sad
but you covered all the plot holes like how he got captured and stuff really well
though if i am interpreting the story right and they, k unit, were searching a warehouse
i dont understand why the prime minister would be traveling through one.
the way your story ended is perfect for a sequel or continuation
i dunno it would be nice if there was more you know find out what happens to alex when he returns to england
you know like what MI6 will do to him and such
anyway this is a good story i enjoyed

Nice job, but it seems like there should be a bit more at the end--like it's not completely complete. (lol...or maybe that's just me wanting more. lol) ;)

If I say I liked this a lot, does that make me (or you) some kind of sick person? ^^ I'll say it anyway. I liked it. You're a great writer, this was Alex-ish, K-Unit is the best and angst is never wrong. So, thanks for sharing!
Aimael

i loved it when they found cub! that was totally awesum, next chappy please!

Nice story, kinda angsty though, Please update as soon as possible, Thankyou!

Aw... Alex is all sad! And that makes me sad!

But KUnit is all... well, if not /happy/ exactly, exuberant, and that makes me exuberant!... Is it just me, or is my life entirely too dictated by fanfiction? lol.

In case you're wondering, The Firm should be starting up very, very soon...

I'm sad that this story is over! It really was very good. A mini!fanfic, I think I shall call it. :D Even though it wasn't like a thousand or three thousand *coughlikeminecough* word story...

Anyway, much sadness, but almost much love from me! ^_^

Wow, nice update! Love the SAS' Pov! ^_^

Wow, that was... harsh. Poor Alex.

Nylah

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I'm going to be honest... I was kinda hoping for some sort of Mission Impossible moment where it turned out that the Jack who was shot was just an imposter...
sigh...
Oh well. Great story! I'm going to go read the other one now!

Aw. Poor Alex. I guess that's what you were going for. I liked it. You captured his - and K-Unit's - personality (personalities) very well. Great job. :)

Poor Alex! I hope he gets out of his depressed stage soon though, it doesn't suit him. I understand though, cos who wouldn't be depressed after what he went through?

Please update soon.

Horribly sad, but brilliant. I love your style of writing, and I thought the idea of a little 'snapshot' of a mission was great - no boring bits!

I want to know what happens to Alex, but I also think that that was a really good - but cruel - ending! (How could you leave it with the last line?! So sad!) Still, at least if he's injured MI6 can't use him again.

Thanks, anyway! :) :) :)