Wonderful!! I love how you write young Sev. Keep writing, we need more like this around here :)

I love it. I love reading the interaction between the marauders and Snape even though it's just awfully painful at points, because it's so true. Seeing Lupin (who I love) hovering at the background of this is depressing but what you know had to happen. I was glad to see Snape scheming to find a way for them to coexist. It's a great story.

I can imagine Snape being very much like this if sorted into Gryffindor. And I don't think being a Gryffindor would have made much difference to Sirius or James -- they bullied others in canon anyway. It would be nice to see more of Snape in Gryffindor. It's a great idea and you write it well.

Ha, love this. Wish you were continuing with it, though it works being a long one-shot. It's really cute, and I love how you kept it accurate, even making up a professor to compensate for the fact that HP's astronomy professor wouldn't have been around at the time.

This was a difficult story to read-- mainly because it felt so painfully believable. Brilliant work.

I liked this a lot--everyone's very much in character (though I have my doubts about Remus participating in the bullying--standing by without doing anything, I can see), and the interactions are so realistic. Have you thought about a sequel? I'd love to see how things change when they realize Lupin's lycanthropy...

I really like this story of a Gryffindor Snape dealing with the Marauders. It would be nice to think that the truce will hold, but I'm wondering if it will. I hope you do another story to follow this. It would be interesting to see what will happen, or even a bit down the road when James starts to take an interest in Lily.

this gave me a stomach ache. i know boys are terrible in their cliques, but james and co. were terribly unlikeable. a very good story and thank you for sharing.

Excellent. Here's hoping they hold to it, and that Snape creates something in writing or a magical pledge of some kind to make sure they stay with their word. Oh, brave purebloods, to beat up on a half blood and a Muggleborn!