Wow! What a powerful tale!

I did not read the whole chapters i got to say Carol always was a jerk. I mean i seen how he would treat eddie and yell at him he always yelled at Steve. Who needs him as a father. He’s a total jerk to his Son Harrtite and him do make a good evil team when they do things to the kinds that is why i think better people should have did this show.

Justin

Great stuff.

This is a really gud story! Where is the rest...Laura almost preggy..NO!lol didnt see that one coming...Your Gud!lol n Hariette and Carl disowning her and telling their kids, her siblings to do the same...omg thats horrible:( Cant wait til the next chapter!

Hey your story is cool! For a moment I actually thought that Judy's nightmare in the middle actually happened but when I saw that Judy woke up from her nightmare I sighed with relief. How stupid of me! I continued reading the story and it got more and more interesting. I am so glad Laura sticks up for her little sister. You should update update update! Judy should have gone to Steve Urkel for advice since he knows about pregnancies. Again update update update update update update update update!

wot! honcor! honcor!

i wish i could write that well! awesome!

Carl is being so mean to poor Judy, i feel sorry for her. Please continue, I'm glad to see Laura is there for her sister

i knew that part was going to be a dream when it was mentioned Harriett grabbed her like that lol. i like your writing style, it's really cool how you describe what's going on and stuff. I'm getting more pulled into your story!

wow! she's pregnant. I was going to do a story about what happened to Judy but mines was going to play around of why Judy left lol i like this so far. i wonder what Rachel is going to say