Lovely, heart breaking and yet lovely to read. The first person was very well written, though I do admit the very last line has me confused and I'm running around in circles trying to figure it out...could you please, pretty please explain?

Very angsty and beautifully written. But like some other reviewers said, I can't grasp the last line. Does it mean that he finally surrendered to his feelings and attacked on her behalf?

This was really sad. ):

i cry. i cry so hard. I cry so hard that my eyes are popping out.

DId he actually KILL HER? QAQ

yes. What a sorrowful pleasure.

I cry. i'll cry. i'll cry more manly tears if you don't make more heartwrenching fanfictions of this two.

MORE POWER TO YOUUU!

beautifully sad.

DEPRESSING.

Wow, that was frick'n awesome...and incredibly depressing. Brilliant.

It's very refreshing to find Itachi in first peron. Let alone, that his first person persona is actually amazing. I think you did an awesome job on this. His character feautures were really acurate, and I loved the few small hints of him slowly growing fond of her. Lovely work, plese keep it up.

Merde sainte. You just wrote a story in Itachi's point of view and managed to keep him in character.

Loved it!

I really like this, Itachi is not often written in first person so this is unique and it's well written.

Oh, how sad! ): I love how it's in Itachi's point of view. You are a really good writer! (:

Okay. Read the A/N at the end. Definitely flows together! I'm a little confused on the ending though. What Itachi thinks, or rather, feels. As you stated it: 'Her lips form nothing, but somehow, I feel that it’s now my turn to leap.' What does that mean? Seriously. I understood Sakura took a leap of faith by loving him, but what did Itachi mean by 'my turn to leap'? I'm so confused on that last little bit. Then again, that last sentence makes this story scream for a sequel. Lolz! So ya. Keep up the awesome work!

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Aw, it was sad. But good. But yeah, .. sad.

I remember reading this before I'll agree that it flows better now. So yeah I like it very much :D