Seriously, a big 'Yay!' for all your inspiration and the writing streak resulting from it!

It's hard to not like Vola, way too cute. I love how you wrote them here, in his point of view. How so very cute, the glam, 'blinged out' jersey he made for her (he made it? a major 'Aw!' for Vince!). Hehe, then him 'carrying' her back to her dorm on his back, them both playing British and proper, that's just too adorable! ;-)

Then for the huddle and game. I'm not a sports person, I mean, I'm all for the excitement and everything, but I don't KNOW sports (psh, see me try to write something with even just a little bit of sports in it, I'd so stink.). But you did a very good job here. Much excitement and tension, with the wonderful humor coming from Michael and Logan. That was too funny (and also very cute) when Michael, so nervous but proud of his Lil' Lisa rooting for him, referred to himself in the third person. Then Logan, just as pumped but happy and proud of of his Quinn, with her "obvious, smokin' beauty and hotness", and trying not to be distracted by her. Seriously, Michael/Misa and Logan/Quogan will never cease to make me smile and all warm and fuzzy!

Then the Choey moment, though minuscule for here, still managed to make me feel just as warm and fuzzy.

I think it was rather clever and different to leave it open like this. Hehe, I could still see a little companion piece for this, maybe? (just a little thought though.)

Another great one Erika, as always! :-D

Now, I'm off to read and review "New". (I started to read it day before yesterday, but something always kept interrupting me. But the whole first half that I've read so far...total excellence. And it really is the first time you've ever written James/Rebecca? Wow. Seriously.) :-)

Finally got to read this, its only fitting that sporting events are what held me up from reading this :-)

I gotta say that that play you came up with was probably one of the weirds football plays I have ever heard of, but that is fine, the weird trick plays are always the best.

Thank you so much for writing this for me, I totally wasn't expecting it, but it was great none the less. Mixing a great writing style like yours with sports is such a perfect combination in my opinion, you should write some more sports based one-shots, just saying :-) Thanks again

i wanted to know how the came ended! i wanted to see if the play worked!

Nice oneshot.

I'm open-minded.

I understand you'll be trying out a Logan/Zoey oneshot, but I see them more as brother and sister.

Very good. I really liked how you put it in Vince's POV. Keep writing. Izzy

Since I usually like canon pairings, Vola was automatically added to my list of favorites but I've never really bothered to read a fanfic centered on them, so this was my first. I had to admit, I really enjoyed it. I loved how Vince had a jersey with her number on it customized just for Lola with all that 'bling.' Hehe So cute. Oh, and not to mention how he carried her off on his back.

During their huddle I could just feel the tension and suspense; it was great. Naturally, the small Quogan parts were my favorite. Hehe I couldn't help but shake my head with a smile when Logan openly said to his teammates that he gets distracted by Quinn's "obvious, smokin' beauty and hotness." I love that part!

I also like how you ended it. At first, I was expecting you to end it with maybe a scene after the entire game, but I like how you ended it instead. Totally unexpected (well, to me at least) and left open with enough excitement to keep the reader smiling in the end. )

I'm totally loving this writing streak you have going on. Hopefully it'll help motivate me to write again because lately, I haven't been in the mood. I've only been reading short one-shots lately too. -sigh- Anyway, keep writing!

-Mina

Great job Erika!

Of course, I have no clue about sports, but the way you described the play, it was something I could totally imagine! Props to you!

Great job! I love Vola! Yay! Oh yeah, PCA so won! I hope they did anyways!lol. Great job Erika, short but totally to the point. And Logan cracks me up in this one.