 Flaming Blizzard 2009-10-18 . chapter 1That was absolutely adorable! *w* You kept both of them IC, and I'm really glad you decided to make Silver a bit more...shy. I always thought he was, with his backstory and all. Yellow and him really did have cute chemistry here, especially with her noticing that yes, he's just scared. Also, I loved the little mentions in the beginning of what the other Dex Holders were doing, because it sounds exactly like what all of them would be doing. ^^ Just...totally cute. Nothing to critique, so great job and keep it up!
~Flaming Blizzard |
 The Violent Tomboy 2009-01-18 . chapter 1Yeah, I suppose now that he's not a rock anymore, Silver's going to try to patch things up with dear ol' daddy...hm, Giovanni should still have Ursaring with him...
Kind of sweet. Nice PokeSpe one shot here! |