Not bad but, Y so short? Well, i don't know if they could handle Silver's secret.

That was absolutely adorable! *w* You kept both of them IC, and I'm really glad you decided to make Silver a bit more...shy. I always thought he was, with his backstory and all. Yellow and him really did have cute chemistry here, especially with her noticing that yes, he's just scared. Also, I loved the little mentions in the beginning of what the other Dex Holders were doing, because it sounds exactly like what all of them would be doing. ^^ Just...totally cute. Nothing to critique, so great job and keep it up!

~Flaming Blizzard

Even though I'm no fan of viridianshipping, I like to think of them as having a sort of brother-sister relationship. I like how you kind of left it open-ended, and gave and ambiguous ending. I also think you did a great job portraying the characters' personalities.

Yeah, I suppose now that he's not a rock anymore, Silver's going to try to patch things up with dear ol' daddy...hm, Giovanni should still have Ursaring with him...

Kind of sweet. Nice PokeSpe one shot here!

Aww... That was so cute. Nice job :3