|Reviews for Papercut Skin|
| StareIntoTheSun 12/21/08 . chapter 1
Wow! That's such a unique idea!
Poor Bella...(she's gonna sleep in that bed, haha)
| herestolife222 12/21/08 . chapter 1
LOVED IT! I especially like the bit of humor that was in there. It makes it more realistic. I know I've laughed during sex before... plenty of times. :)
| justawritier 12/21/08 . chapter 1
hot and sweet at the same time. great job.
| kmander 12/21/08 . chapter 1
That was dirty and full of awesome. I love it!
| crazyevildru 12/21/08 . chapter 1
wow this was so creative! it was delicious and hot and included some of my favorite lines from that scene in the movie as well! well done!
| InLoveWithJesse 12/21/08 . chapter 1
He, fantastic :) You managed to make it less weird than it seems, and so HILARIOUS too (“Jasper? Bella, why are you calling out my brother’s name? I know he’s deviously handsome, and a much better lover than me, but why would you do such a thing?” is my personal favorite, LOL). Great job :)
| theHeartoftheOceanx32 12/21/08 . chapter 1
that was great. it was hilarious and at hte same time really sweet and extremly ackward because of the fact that their pretending to have sex with their brother. lol you should do another one with them role playing Emmett and Rose
| laloveskt 12/21/08 . chapter 1
Damn, that was hot;) Very dirty, but hot. Edward is totally going to smell them in Bella's room! A quick sequel of that would be hilarious:)
| The Only Pancake 12/21/08 . chapter 1
This was really great. I was laughing for most of it, but the ending was still really sweet. Very original idea, too! I never would have thought! Next time I read Eclipse, this is going to come into my mind. :D
| exitlight 12/21/08 . chapter 1
| omgiwantthisaccounttogoaway 12/21/08 . chapter 1
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! thats SUCH a funny idea for role playing! HA! :-)
| CallistoLexx 12/21/08 . chapter 1
This was excellent. Funny and hot and just...excellent.
| Notinusenow 12/21/08 . chapter 1
Very nice. clever idea.
be interesting to see peoples reactions to their roleplaying...or maybe im just crazy.
| seevousplay 12/21/08 . chapter 1
Awesome of course. Honestly, this was totes amazing. I wish I could be as awesome as you.
Flavva flav ;]
Ps: only saw 2 little mistakes, totes don't even need my help. Now... where's The Holiday?