Wow! That's such a unique idea!

Poor Bella...(she's gonna sleep in that bed, haha)

LOVED IT! I especially like the bit of humor that was in there. It makes it more realistic. I know I've laughed during sex before... plenty of times. :)

hot and sweet at the same time. great job.

That was dirty and full of awesome. I love it!

wow this was so creative! it was delicious and hot and included some of my favorite lines from that scene in the movie as well! well done!

He, fantastic :) You managed to make it less weird than it seems, and so HILARIOUS too (“Jasper? Bella, why are you calling out my brother’s name? I know he’s deviously handsome, and a much better lover than me, but why would you do such a thing?” is my personal favorite, LOL). Great job :)

that was great. it was hilarious and at hte same time really sweet and extremly ackward because of the fact that their pretending to have sex with their brother. lol you should do another one with them role playing Emmett and Rose

Damn, that was hot;) Very dirty, but hot. Edward is totally going to smell them in Bella's room! A quick sequel of that would be hilarious:)

This was really great. I was laughing for most of it, but the ending was still really sweet. Very original idea, too! I never would have thought! Next time I read Eclipse, this is going to come into my mind. :D

Good work!

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! thats SUCH a funny idea for role playing! HA! :-)

This was excellent. Funny and hot and just...excellent.

Very nice. clever idea.

be interesting to see peoples reactions to their roleplaying...or maybe im just crazy.

Awesome of course. Honestly, this was totes amazing. I wish I could be as awesome as you.

Flavva flav ;]

Ps: only saw 2 little mistakes, totes don't even need my help. Now... where's The Holiday?