A great story. Very good.

Ilove all your stories

To the coward who doesn't have the guts to sign their name to their reviews:

Eion is an Irish boy's name, I looked it up in a names book before I chose it. It means gift of god. I didn't use Connor because I posted it before Connor's name was revealed on the show. Which is also why it doesn't say AU.

what kind of ridiculous name is Eoin, isn;t that a girls name and its connor C-O-N-N-E-R, sorry but seriously put that this is an AU in the summary and sory but this story really is ridiculous!

Impressive...fascinating concept, characters (fairly) true to TV (art imitating art, I guess p). Me like )

Oh...my...God... that was cruel and unusual! you can't just leave us hanging like this! Is this like, part of a series or what? There's a bunch of unanswered questions and i need my closure! SEQUEL PLEASE!

Very sad ending - but the idea is an ingenious one, and it would be interesting to see Holtz try something like this. Even more interesting to see the group try to deal with it. Very cool concept.

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Ooh...angsty...nice job; I love new angles, even when they're so sad!

please don't let it end like that! a sequel please? this is really good! :D very touching and sad.

I was glad to see this angle played out so well, thank you.

I really liked it, but is that it? I mean...Eoin should have some sort of role in new chapters or a sequel or something.

That was...depressing. Poor Angel. Poor Fang Gang. Poor baby. Disturbing Holtz. Good and skilled writing, though. However, I disagree with the idea. If Angel could survive centuries of torture in a demon dimension I'm willing to believe that his demon could survive Holtz's torture session. That's my ony complaint though. Good job.

Damn, that was good. I hope that's not the end of the story.

Awwww... that was sad *sniff sniff* I don't like Holtz anymore... grrr